Talk:Dachia

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Most of the page is fine. The subsection Consortium and Conflict has tonal issues which read more like an RP scene than a historical summary. XavierStordiz (talk) 23:26, 17 May 2024 (UTC)


Edited down surplus flowery language in Consortium and Conflict. And simplified Second Battle again. foxyowl (talk) 01:13, 18 May 2024 (UTC)

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